Second draft of the script- Jo White

• One draft of the letter in our short film has already been posted
• A few more drafts of it will be posted to make sure it's perfect before filming starts.
• Apart from the letter we havnt decided upon what else the characters might say to each other.
• In the planning stage so far, we have the couple saying hello to each other.
• And at the end of the scene we have Aime telling Rich and (the auidence) that "she's moving on" but another idea that Aime had was for Rich to tell her to move on, as this could be more effective.
• As of yet the final dialogue hasn't been set in stone, but planning for this is ongoing, and may alter during filming as the story comes together.

Jo White.