Inital research Jo White

I have posted a message on face book asking peers what they think of our narrative so far, a few comments suggested that people like the narrative because we've kept the idea simple.

further comments on our narrative will be posted with a link to the comments when a wider variety of the audience messages me back.


A scene from Twilight (2008) has been referenced to being similar to our storyline.






This shot is inspiring because this type of shot is something that we would like to create within our own film. However i don't think having the characters looking straight at each other would work as well as this does, because facial expression allows the characters to look as if nothing else matters, than that moment and them being together. Where as our characters are having to move on.

Jo White.