This is our final script for our production. We altered some phrases so it didn't sound 'cheesy' or unrealistic.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/filmmaking/guide/before-you-start/writing-a-script
(Shots 1-5 silence, except non diegetic soundtrack)
Shot 6: Hi Amie,
Shot 7: I'm so sorry that i had to leave you, you have to understand that you are so dear to me and you always will be.
Shot 8: Just because I'm gone doesn't mean that'll ever change.
Shot 9: I need you to know that i felt like i just couldn't be the man that you wanted, or even deserved.
Shot 10: I didn't mean to hurt you and i know that my death will have done this, but you have to believe me when i say that I'm sorry
Shot 11: but i couldn't see any other way for me to go on.
Shot 13: The choice's i made were never good enough, and i always ended up doing the wrong thing
Shot 14: and it wasn't fair on you to bring you into that world that i had created. It was wrong of me.
Shot 15: Everything was my fault. I'm sorry for blaming and hurting you. I hope I didn't disappoint you or let you down
Shot 16: I will always be there for you no matter what, Amie. I will always love you forever.
Shot 17: I couldn't tell you goodbye face to face
Shot 18: Silence
Shot 19: Silence
Shot 20: Silence
Amie's dialogue begins...
Shot 21: You know Rich, sometimes I feel like you're here with me
Shot 23: But now you're gone, I need to move on
Shot 24: I need to move on
Shot 25: Silence
Shot 26: But I'm hoping my final decision will now set you free.
All my love forever
Rich. "
Shot 27: I'm moving on Rich
Friday, 29 January 2010
Final Script
Jo White, Amie Nelms and Emma Robertson
Posted by Amie Nelms at 02:47
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