Friday, 29 January 2010

Final Script

This is our final script for our production. We altered some phrases so it didn't sound 'cheesy' or unrealistic.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/filmmaking/guide/before-you-start/writing-a-script

(Shots 1-5 silence, except non diegetic soundtrack)

Shot 6: Hi Amie,

Shot 7: I'm so sorry that i had to leave you, you have to understand that you are so dear to me and you always will be.

Shot 8: Just because I'm gone doesn't mean that'll ever change.

Shot 9: I need you to know that i felt like i just couldn't be the man that you wanted, or even deserved.

Shot 10: I didn't mean to hurt you and i know that my death will have done this, but you have to believe me when i say that I'm sorry

Shot 11: but i couldn't see any other way for me to go on.

Shot 13: The choice's i made were never good enough, and i always ended up doing the wrong thing

Shot 14: and it wasn't fair on you to bring you into that world that i had created. It was wrong of me.

Shot 15: Everything was my fault. I'm sorry for blaming and hurting you. I hope I didn't disappoint you or let you down

Shot 16: I will always be there for you no matter what, Amie. I will always love you forever.

Shot 17: I couldn't tell you goodbye face to face

Shot 18: Silence

Shot 19: Silence

Shot 20: Silence

Amie's dialogue begins...
Shot 21: You know Rich, sometimes I feel like you're here with me

Shot 23: But now you're gone, I need to move on
Shot 24: I need to move on

Shot 25: Silence

Shot 26: But I'm hoping my final decision will now set you free.
All my love forever
Rich. "


Shot 27: I'm moving on Rich


Jo White, Amie Nelms and Emma Robertson

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