Auidence Feedback Jo White

Maiken Davidson 21 March at 18:32
I like the opening shot, it's very well framed and how you bring the credits together with that shot to show that time has passed worked really well. I liked the way you experimented with the camera using different shots and different camera techniques, though at some points it was a bit 'bumpy' where it would have been better for a straight zoom and tilt of camera. The camera behind the female character as she walked towards the bench. I liked the reverese shot between both the characters as the letter was read, and that she was mouthing the words along, however i think it would have been best when the guy spoke to make it slightly echo-y to show that he isn't really there - giving it maybe a more emotional effect.

The green screen was good, though it was a bit fuzzy round the characters. The scene when they are lying together in the field is really good, it's really sweet as you show there pov of the sky and then we get a birds eye view of them which I really liked! I liked the bit when he was hugging her too, but felt like that scene was dragged out a little too long. When he disappears reading the last bit of the letter is emotional! I liked as she walked away you went from black and white to colour, this was a really good effect as it showed her moving on.

The music was really good, it made it different to other films as it was unique and suited the film, though it may have been an idea to have it playing when they were both lying in the field.

Overall I think it's really good! Well framed and you used a variety of camera angles that were really effective! Only cons or things you could of improved on was when he was speaking making it a bit echo-y and shorten some of the scenes!