This is the finished version of our poster. A few changes have been made from the original post, posted previously to make the poster more authentic.
Jo White.
Thursday, 1 April 2010
Finished Poster Jo White
Posted by Amie Nelms at 01:58
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These are comments on the printed version that you submited.
1. Firstly, it is very good, so no worries. Will be a level 4 in my opinion.
2. Few things - Justify all text to an imaginary line on the right - Franklin, romance, jearker, the box of certificate should all come in to line.
3. Same goes for left hand side with block of text, The, A, and Amie all in a line.
4. Block of text at bottom - could all be justifiedright aswell as left.
5. Tag line - could be justified to fit under the ALL.
6. A film by Jo White - could be justified to fit at the toip of ALL.
7. Date centred over the o
12 Cert needs to be centred in box
Source of the comments maybe in a different font.
overall, conventions are good. The photo is well composed, perhaps my main criticism would be how effective it is in communicating the nature of the content of the film. There is no indication of the grief, supernatural side of the film. I like the title as it is appropriate to content of the film, I like the tag line,
The review
Again very good. I have made comments on the original for you to work on - nothing major, just a few alternative suggestions to the occasional word, and one paragraph.
There are no references to any other films or any other academic referencing.
Few lines are cut of in the middle.
All my love perhps needs to be italics when mentioned.
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