Feedback responses for Research part 4- Emma Robertson

Conclusion on feedback on this page

Likes

1. Good storyline
   
2. Sad- commiting suicide
3. wanting to find out more- WHY?!
4. not boring or O.T.T
5. Something new & exciting
6. Appeals to girl audience about boys, love and emotions
7. Fav scene: you don't know he is a ghost until she blanks him
   
8. Emotional drama
9. Likes the idea of boy wrote the letter, but he's not there- adds to the effect
   
10. Fav scene: girl walks off into the distance- moving on, new life
11. Poetic quality
    
12. Twist-guy is dead and waiting for his girlfriend

Dislikes

1. Boyfriend being dead- can't he have just left her? A lot of girls could relate to the story if he left their relationship

Emma Robertson