Feedback responses for Research part 3- Emma Robertson

Conclusion of feedback on this page

Likes

1. Depressing- grabs the audience's attention
2. Teen girls can relate to romance
3. Storyline of heartbreak and moving on
4. Favourite of girl reading the letter, but the boy's voice
5. Ghost illusion
6. Love theme

Dislikes

1. Ethical issues surrounding suicide- needs to be handled with care
2. Questions of why did he kill himself?
3. Wanting to know more
   
4. Teen girls are less likely to lose someone
5. Needs alterations to the girl running away in the field, maybe the boy walking away instead
6. Rushed ending?
7. Maybe show the gradual process of moving on regardin the female character?
   

Emma Robertson